Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Live Wire

This poem would have turned into a completely different way if I wouldn't have written it on 2 different days. The only difference between two days was that 1st half was written by a pessimist and 2nd half by an optimist. Actually its not much of a poem, after reading it I thought its more of an incomplete rap song but still have a look at the poem/rap song by yours truly

Live Wire
When the end of tunnel doesn't look bright
and where you are standing, you feel the darkness of night.


You feel deprived, You feel helpless
and you know that only way to overcome them is to become fearless.


but the fear has instill deep within the soul
and is stopping you to play your role.


The role that has potential to carve out new ways
and can become a reckoning force which can turn night into days.


Then what it is that is pushing you aside
Whatever is the obstacle, you have to become your own guide.


because deep inside your heart you know that you are a live wire
and all you need is a little fire......

3 comments:

Viji said...

//because deep inside your heart you know that you are a live wire
and all you need is a little fire...... /// Very cute lines:-)

Gandhi said...

Wow...is what i can say....bhai it's only u who can make a rap song out of it......and I promise I'll soon get it rap'd by me friend and upload it in youtube!!!


Everyone should no ma friend is not only a awesome poet but an awesome rap composer......



Gud job...waiting for some more gud stuff from u......

Abhishek Rao said...

lovely bro!!..I cant believe I didnt comment on it earlier!!
tu chahe toh ye song linkin' park ko de sakta hai...world famous ho jayega!!